... he saw the ship saling out of sight. Flox was leaving the country in that ship. For a normal person, that would mean the end. But Chris had never given up in his life and he knew that he was not going to start giving up now.
Floxs' ship was still in the horizon when he started looking for another boat with the same destination. He didn't care about the circumstances, or the effort that he was doing, all he wanted was to be with Flox.
That evening he was on a ship, in his small room, with just a backpack with some clothes.
It was a long trip. Chris had to work hard on the ship, helping everyone. He also had to fight, but that's another story.
Eventually he arrived at the city where Flox was supposed to be. But he had no home, no money, and no food. So he started asking for money on the streets.
Sometimes he was under the impression he had seen Flox. That times, he ran and ran behind her, but she just disappeared every single time.
One day, Chris was asking for money at a curch door, when a newly married couple came out of it. When he saw that the woman was Flox, he realized that sometimes, giving up is the best option".
Well, here you go. This is the first story I've written in English, and even if it's kind of crap, I'm so proud of it, because I'm under the feeling that it hasn't got almost any mistakes (hopefully) Please, as always, if you see any mistake just coment it below.
I'm sorry about the past two days, but I just had an awfull week, and I'm kind of trying to start over again this afternoon.
Do you write short storys? Then, please, share them with me!
xoxo
Elisa
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